मराठी कविता | पाहू रिटायर झाल्यावर

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अंगणातल्या रातराणीच्या सुगंधात रेंगाळताना,
सह्याद्रीतल्या जीर्ण गडाच्या तटबंदीवर वाऱ्याशी बोलताना,
कुठल्यातरी पायवाटेवर वेळकाळ विसरून चालत जाताना,
त्याला नेमकं वाटत होतं,
'ह्याच निवांत क्षणांसाठी तर सारी धडपड सुरु आहे'.
पण मग विचार आला,
'पाहू, रिटायर झाल्यावर'.

- हेरंब
ISupportNAAM

Comments

lifestalker said…
It will be great, if you translate a bit. Tell me whether I am right or not, the poem is about retirement, the nayak is infatuated with the beauty of nature, and interested in a lone journey.
9 November 2016 at 10:11
The Last Nomad said…
Yes, very close. But the nayak postpones his plans to post retirement, like many of us. And who knows whether he may make it then?
11 November 2016 at 07:48
The Last Nomad said…
@lifestalker... 10 words! All you have is 10 words (at most) to key in a micro-tale and impress the readers. Take the micro-tale challenge now: goo.gl/2gMtJa
11 November 2016 at 09:48
lifestalker said…
@Insight Stories, I accept the challenge.
11 November 2016 at 15:22
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